Ax3L33's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lotus]

Shame on yu for being too lazy to draw feet xD

[Forgotten Lands]

Your work look like paintings.

[The Faces of Heroes]

Keep it up. You are one of my biggest inspirations right now. Everything looks pure and simplistic, in a good way. As previous poster, the only thing that bothers me, is the hair going over the hair on the girl to the right. You could have just erased the whole eye. Great work!

MELONCONCARNE responds:

Yeah I agree, that's just a little thing I do with the "style". Of course I think I should stop showing the eyes through hair. Once again thank you! It means a lot!

[Robo Nurse]

I like the concept, but I just can't se why you had to draw the needle and the backround with such little effort. Like, come one, you could have drawn a needle that doesn't look like a flat surface, because I see that you do know how to shade.
The background is just a blurry mess to me, and those lightning-thinges are just ... Ugh ...
I liked the picture overall and the hair, eyes and neck are really well done. Good job! Just don't wast a good picture next time and spend some extra hours to get it all right.

FroggywithFries responds:

Thanks man, good response.

[Streeeeeeetch]

I hate how the drawings you make look so simple, yet so perfect. Simplicity is so hard achieving, beacuse you can't cover up misstakes with details and bullshit. You're a big inspiration, keep doing what you do!
If i where to critisice you, I would have loved a background, something to give the image more dimension.

MELONCONCARNE responds:

Damn dude, you just made my week! And I agree with the background thing, thanks!

[Take-off]

I love the elements of this illustration. The backround is very sharp even though the builtings is coverd in fog, and thats a good thing. People tend to just gaussian blur everything out of laziness ... which brings me to the close objects. I don't quite se any nearby objects that looks the same as the blury ones close to me, which makes me sort of wonder what the objects close to me is. I think you could have drawn something simlar further away, or just left those black - blue objects out, because they sort of bother me.

The futuristic theme is cool, and the drawing overall is good, so i really must say that I like it. :)

[Sword Fight]

Good usage of the blur, its very efecfull. I don't quite se where the guard to the rights second leg went, but thats not the most important part of this artwork, so I'll just leave a: ?

Awesome drawing however. :)

[Sprite Test]

Don't you think the character needs a little less motion? No hard feelings, but i think that the 'crotch protecting thing' and the right gun are moving a little too much.
Where are you going to use the animation. To me it looks like a 'standing still' game animation.

I must say that the drawing looks very nice though, and one thing i particular that made it look so cool where how slim the feet are, and that looks sort of nice. The caracter is very simple, and definitely not overdone, and thats good according to me. It takes skill to make art that looks simple, and yet very impressive. Stuff thats simple and yet complicated is a pattern much art follow, and if youre going to use this as a character for a series of whatever, you dont wanna draw all those details over and over again.

Godd work!

[Storm Duel]

I like all the action, and the things that are going on in the picture. The things that are happening, the motion, the wind, and the water. The image however is rather foggy to me, and lacks conrtast, and becomes very blurry. Maybe this was sort of the effect you where looking for, but in that case i think you overdid it a bit.
i like the feeling of emotion, especially in the mans face, where he bites his teeth together. Thats an emotional expression that makes me like the image very much, even if the girls face are a little missformed. I would recomend working with more pixels maybe.

The capes ave very beautifully made, and the character poses are well thought though. Good work!